October 2021-Blog feedback and Learner Respond

 WWW:

  •  An impressive start to Media Studies.

  • You display some great practical skills using Adobe Photoshop with your editing skills on the fruit bowl task.

EBI:

  • Proof-read your work for spelling and grammar in all blogs (including blog titles. Also, try to use GLoW (media terminology) in your blog work 

LR:

  1. Add detail to your posts so that your ideas are fully explained

  2. Fix spelling and grammar work on all posts

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